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I can’t take another golden smile, choose her instead
Come on sweetie; please just empty out my head
Packed to the rim with your unrestricted fibs
Slipping out of this choking collar that’s strapped to the leash in your fist

You’re a stubborn, ignorant, horribly handsome award
But the requirements you’re charging, I just can’t afford
The tears that rip down my cheeks show my untamable affection
Your flaws are what make you disgustingly perfect

The unique echoes of my screams I can’t resubmit
They are only audible to me but I don’t really give a shit
It better look like I don’t care about what the hell goes on
Because hiding the truth is almost impossible for this stupid girl

Come to your senses
But wait, wait
Will this action soak up instant regret or fate?
Wondering whether to accept the gemstone or not

It’s unbearably terrifying to make up my mind
But it has to be done eventually over time
And with a deep gaze into your sparkling eyes, your loyalty somehow shines through
The way you smile so naturally at me
Your eyes gleaming
Your voice tender
I come to my senses
©2009 ~WarriorzGal
:iconwarriorzgal:

Author's Comments

Since nobody seems to be commenting on what they think certain parts of my poems represent, I'll just tell you.
This poem is basically saying that sometimes personality doesn't matter. Or looks. What matters is how much he loves you. And if he truly loves you alot, then it could be worth it.
But through most of the poem, the girl's just insanely confused about everythinggg.
<3
Even though this isn't actually what's happening in my life right now... :\

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:iconwishful-soul:
Hun, you pretty much lost all your sanity. l D

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MIIIIIISOJI MISAKIIIIIIIII~~~ :la:
:iconwarriorzgal:
I know I did! D:
And did you comment get cut off? It says "I D"

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**I hate how you broke my heart, but I still love you with all the little pieces**

Running from her fears, her thoughts, her mind, only to be chased until she was finally forced to let him go.
-Blinded
:iconhealthclassmayhem:
In a way, though, personality does matter. If you're with someone and have nothing in common and are total opposites, you'll eventually not be able to stand one another. Love is infuriatingly confusing, no? Just one last thing: the first sentence in the second stanza doesn't make much sense. Mind explaining it to me :XD:?

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I've seen two epileptics share a bowl of noodles with more grace than in any of your dance moves

Let's show the wind how to fly!
:iconwarriorzgal:
Sometimes that is the case, but other times, opposites attract. xD I know many couples who are COMPLETE opposites and they're madly in love. hahaha.
Do you mean this one:
"And the question gnawing at my heart is hollowing
Do you ever miss the future?"
If you do, Do you ever miss the future? if the question. It's basically saying do you ever think about what could've been, do you miss what we might've become, you know? Because in this particular poem, before I realized her loved me so much, I was just extremely confused (this is not what's going on in my actual love life. I am very confused, but he doesn't love me that much, therefore, not worth it).
So that question is just gnawing at my heart. Idk how else to explain it. xD

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**I hate how you broke my heart, but I still love you with all the little pieces**

Running from her fears, her thoughts, her mind, only to be chased until she was finally forced to let him go.
-Blinded
:iconhealthclassmayhem:
I meant this: "You’re a stubborn, ignorant, horribly handsome award". Sorry if I pointed it out in a weird way!

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I've seen two epileptics share a bowl of noodles with more grace than in any of your dance moves

Let's show the wind how to fly!
:iconwarriorzgal:
That's okay!
And he's stubborn, ignorant, and handsome, but I wnat to win him. ;]

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**I hate how you broke my heart, but I still love you with all the little pieces**

Running from her fears, her thoughts, her mind, only to be chased until she was finally forced to let him go.
-Blinded
:iconwishful-soul:
Hurrhurr~

Um...no...


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MIIIIIISOJI MISAKIIIIIIIII~~~ :la:
:iconhealthclassmayhem:
Oh, okay! That makes more sense.

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I've seen two epileptics share a bowl of noodles with more grace than in any of your dance moves

Let's show the wind how to fly!
:iconwarriorzgal:
Hahaha, ok. ^^

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**I hate how you broke my heart, but I still love you with all the little pieces**

Running from her fears, her thoughts, her mind, only to be chased until she was finally forced to let him go.
-Blinded

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